Barajou c20 version 2

I was in the middle of a date with a slim jim and a Grand Am this evening when Reb gave me a desperate phone call. “Mel,” she said. “I screwed up. Bad. Fix it, or the fangirls kill my dog =(”

Seeing as her dog happens to be my dog, I could do nothing but comply! So here’s a version 2 of the latest chapter of Barajou, missing bubbles recovered. Don’t get uppity about the typesetting; I had to fix it myself, and if I were any good at this… well, I’d be typesetting!

Here’s the corrected page, but you can also download the corrected chapter if that sits with you better. ’tis a must for Kaede x Anis fans. Enjoy! Now give me back my dog, dammit!

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When not ruining everything (including books), takes care of scanning, QC, and sometimes cleaning duties. That includes dishes. Rebmastu is a slob. Email or hit me up on twitter if things start looking weird around here!

10 thoughts on “Barajou c20 version 2

  1. thienthy says:

    Thanks for the fix! When I read the corrected part, I think my jaw dropped. Literally. Good thing I’m not a zombie though.XD

  2. Nandy says:

    Sorry, but what has changed? Yes, I’m that kind of distracted girl, and I only read again the first part. All I noticed that was somehow different was the “girl I liked” thing, which was amazing!!! Was this it?

  3. Melfra says:

    Sorry, but what has changed? Yes, I’m that kind of distracted girl, and I only read again the first part. All I noticed that was somehow different was the “girl I liked” thing, which was amazing!!! Was this it?

    Yup, says so right up in the post. That page was the only one with issues =P

  4. empish says:

    Lol, that is a significant difference, having that line or not. Thanks much!

    Is it just me or does the “Are you Rhodecia’s gf?” line make it sound like he thinks Anis is dating both guys in the group together? xD Is it that obvious that she’s a playa?

  5. Melfra says:

    Is it just me or does the “Are you Rhodecia’s gf?” line make it sound like he thinks Anis is dating both guys in the group together? xD Is it that obvious that she’s a playa?

    You wouldn’t believe how hard I tried to get Reb to rephrase that as, “Are you currently involved in a polygamous relationship with Rhodecia?!”, but nooooo. Something about context blah blah. Look at how many guys she has following her around all the time! The girl’s a total pimp!

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